Thanks Ruchi...! :)
आपकी ये छोटी सी कोशिश बहुत कुछ कह गयी , क्या खूब चरित्र चित्रण किया एक वृक्ष और इंसान के बीच, keep writing n put ur thoughts in words :)
होंसला अफजाई के लिए बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया आरोही जी.....!निरंतर कोशिश जारी रहेगी। :)
Jordaaarr h boss... :)
Thanks Neerat..! :)
kabhi hasrat ho kush jatane kki to juba se bya na karana ak tarika h hamare goyal ji ke pass gar milo hame kabhi aap ,to inka pata puch lena keep writing ............
Bahut khoob vijesh bhai...!! Shukriyaa..:)
DivanshuWritten very well.The first two stanzas reminded of the old days when people used to take rest under the shade of the tree,or young girls used the branches for their swing. Now very little of that is left in the urban areas atleast.When a Senior Citizen like is moved by your poem, that means you have composed the entire poem so well. Great.
Thanks a lot suresh ji that you liked this small effort of mine..:) I have spent my childhood by seeing all these things, & u are right..now very little of that is left..!